Molly's Saga
Brave boat
battered by the seas
violent encounters
courageous Olaf
battles against the dragon of the sea
Olaf has not won this battle
the dragon of the sea is triumphant
the crew are tired, hungry and sore
this day they will be with
Odin, Thor and Njord.
Dani's Saga
Bloody slaughter
amongst the wrestling waves
as the cruel sea
smashes the boat
as the jagged sea shore slays the boat
nothing remains
only sand...
Ronan's Saga
The men struggled to stay on board
the bruised boat
wild waves crashed onto the deck
the vessel was split in two
the sea swallowed them up
All class 4/5 saga style writing is on display outside the classroom.
Awesome poems! Very atmospheric.
ReplyDeleteThese poems are great! I able to picture each of the scenes vividly.
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